Freedman in The
Aggressive Egg invokes his audience to establish an understanding on the
adverse debates when it comes to stating something with proper/improper
language. Freedman incorporates two researchers, male and female, to expose the
idea of subconscious battles that both sexes face when it comes to domination.
Freedman’s study of choice is the
language barrier that most biologists face when accurately passing down
recently discovered material; Freedman brings forth this idea through his
character Emily Martin. Freedman reveals that Martin observes the way
biologists become offended when she explains how she discovered that sperm is
pulled by forced into the egg. This image, along with other language, that
biologists commonly use in reference to the sperm and egg are the utter opposition
of the stereotypes of each sex, which each person expects to hear. What is
meant by this is, for example, most biologists state that the sperm is potent
and the egg is aggressive like a spider, therefore bolstering males into
believing they’re the superior sex and therefore, disappointing women. As
Martin evolves more in her study through research and observing other groups findings,
she receives a second opinion on language difference when she meets Gilbert. Gilbert
refers to the “..egg as engaging in a dialog with the sperm rather than gluing
it down..” (Freedman, 1992). This appears to be more accurate because it
doesn’t appear to engage is an argument of battle of the sexes.
Traditional or common portrayals of the fertilization process
are inaccurately based on what truly happens because of typical stereotypes and
biased information of male and female. Male biologists blow off the idea of the
egg “controlling” the sperm by trapping it because they feel that it makes
males appear less weak in comparison to women in reality. The limitations of
Martin’s study yielded to reader’s wondering why there were small, but vital lies
told due to chauvinistic beliefs.
Ultimately, the language that is commonly used to describe
egg and sperm has caused many biologists to cease in doing more research on
what truly happens in reality because they’re comfortable with the idea of what
they think happens. The language used employs a sense of relief and character
because it almost feels neutral when the language is appropriate and not
disturbing/ harmful to any sex. Martin ultimately comes to the understanding that
people can accept new discoveries with neutral languages and images. I agree with
Freedman’s idea of the language barriers formed in certain articles and how it
has the ability to enrage or uplift someone, which may drastically affect the
acceptance of new findings. I can use this idea to expand my audiences’ attentions
when I write on topics that may be powerful. This plays a role with what I’m
learning in class because we’ve been talking about language barriers and how
they affect people when trying to write a paper.
Bibliography
Freedman,
D. (1992, June). Aggressive egg. Discover
Magazine. Retrieved from http://discovermagazine.com/1992/jun/theaggressiveegg55
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